Goodness! I am going to absolutely wilt if Madara dies. It's already pretty heartbreaking that Madara and Izuna's relationship is suffering. :/
I like to head cannon that Madara would have turned out happy and successful if he had his own Sakura or person outside his clan that didn't view him as a controlled asset. But here, looks like he is destined to have some level of unhappiness.
And poor Sakura. Earlier when Madara was forceful and Sakura was unprepared for him and fearful of her voice being unheard was already a concern, that that may come back in a bad way. But Izuna taking advantage of her while she slept is just... Urg. Poor girl, can't catch a break. Here's hoping that Izuna didn't catch her the week before ovulation so she doesn't end up preggers.
Anyways! /Rant? /Tangent?
Excellent work, read like a story polished. The meticulous details of their relationship (outside horny young attraction) is definitely sweet.
Thanks for your time and effort! Can't wait for the next installment!
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Always Breaking Hearts!
Date: 2023-07-29 06:33 pm (UTC)I like to head cannon that Madara would have turned out happy and successful if he had his own Sakura or person outside his clan that didn't view him as a controlled asset. But here, looks like he is destined to have some level of unhappiness.
And poor Sakura. Earlier when Madara was forceful and Sakura was unprepared for him and fearful of her voice being unheard was already a concern, that that may come back in a bad way. But Izuna taking advantage of her while she slept is just... Urg. Poor girl, can't catch a break. Here's hoping that Izuna didn't catch her the week before ovulation so she doesn't end up preggers.
Anyways! /Rant? /Tangent?
Excellent work, read like a story polished. The meticulous details of their relationship (outside horny young attraction) is definitely sweet.
Thanks for your time and effort! Can't wait for the next installment!