OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG. I am only on this website for your stories Moor and used to login daily to check for a story update from you since Part 7. Eventually I stopped and assumed I would get an email when you updated BUT I DIDN'T so have missed the last few Parts you've posted. 😠*Thankfully*, the urge to check today was strong and I am SO SO happy I remembered because there are more Parts to this story AND your Untitled ABO fic. So hyped, I legit stopped working to read the latest parts of this amazing fic.
Their first time was so intense! Love that we got snippets of their encounters that lead up to this moment. It helped round out the experience and believability from where you left off last chapter. The whole time I felt slightly anxious that someone would interrupt them since there was such a heavy emphasis on "THIS IS IT! THIS IS IT" and "IT MUST BE PERFECT FOR MY SAKURA" so was relieved that all went well but omg did anyone find out right after it happened? I mostly think of Izuna. How is Izuna handling MadaSaku's relationship - surely he's aware there's something between them and is he jealous? And *red eyes*?! We got a glimpse of it a few chapters ago but now it was very prominent, I need some explaining! Also Madara was very "mine mine mine" which gave off a very...beastly feel. The Uchiha's are not what they seem huh? I am excited to see where you're taking that! Despite the possessiveness, Madara was actually very sweet and it warmed my heart. Lovely relationship, smut, and chapter. Thanks!
PERFECT
Date: 2022-03-09 09:00 pm (UTC)Their first time was so intense! Love that we got snippets of their encounters that lead up to this moment. It helped round out the experience and believability from where you left off last chapter. The whole time I felt slightly anxious that someone would interrupt them since there was such a heavy emphasis on "THIS IS IT! THIS IS IT" and "IT MUST BE PERFECT FOR MY SAKURA" so was relieved that all went well but omg did anyone find out right after it happened? I mostly think of Izuna. How is Izuna handling MadaSaku's relationship - surely he's aware there's something between them and is he jealous? And *red eyes*?! We got a glimpse of it a few chapters ago but now it was very prominent, I need some explaining! Also Madara was very "mine mine mine" which gave off a very...beastly feel. The Uchiha's are not what they seem huh? I am excited to see where you're taking that! Despite the possessiveness, Madara was actually very sweet and it warmed my heart. Lovely relationship, smut, and chapter. Thanks!